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Friday, 16 October 2015

today on lunch there was a big bee hive in the trees suddenly everyone ran the bees were aggressively   

5 comments:

  1. Great attempt at adverbs Piringi.
    Read this and compare so you can see where you need to edit next time.

    Today at lunch there was a big beehive in the trees. Suddenly everyone ran. The bees were aggressively chasing us.

    Punctuation is your main focus.

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  2. Great attempt at adverbs Piringi.
    Read this and compare so you can see where you need to edit next time.

    Today at lunch there was a big beehive in the trees. Suddenly everyone ran. The bees were aggressively chasing us.

    Punctuation is your main focus.

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  4. Do your punctuation just et to know

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  5. Do your punctuation just et to know

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